2014년 9월 29일 월요일

week 8 - confirmation

1. What is my thesis?


Even though globalization and internet has made better world, internet's contribution to globalization is negative.

2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis


I am using articles and opinions from  the Guardian ,The New York Times and  Forbes. 




3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or
 emotion?

My argumets are mostely based on evidence. I used sourced from convincing newspapers, which most of people know and are popular for being deliver trustful news. Also, my arguments are logic because theya are from convincing data and they are closely related to thesis.
 
< My Confirmation>

However, globalization is not always positive. Although positive effects still exist, we should be aware of its negative impacts for the future for ourselves and people all over the world.
First, in economical aspects, globalization bring much bigger gap between the poor and the rich. According to BBC, Globalization operates mostly in the interests of the richest countries, which continue to dominate world trade at the expense of developing countries. This tendency leads governments of developed countries to allow their corporations to build their factories outside of their own countries. However, this phenomenon take away the industrial foundation of their own and opportunities of economical growth. The corporations want to use low wages in foreign countries which increase their profit margins. International corporations build their factories all over the world and exploit labor and take away their development opportunities. This tendency leads to much bigger the gap between the rich and the poor. India can be an example of this phenomenon. At first, people think India has a benefit from globalization, which gained lots of profits from new industries that related to international corporations. However, most average people's lives in India say differently. They say that poverty became more serious than before. One in three Indians live on less than $1 a day and India is still home to the world's largest conglomeration of malnourished people. Also, The latest UN Human Development Report worries the gap between the rich and the poor by economical growth and social progress. A narrow-based and weak foundation of economical become serious problem. Another problem is that inequalities that globalization has failed to remove. Even though a few people may evaluate globalization positively, its effects don't always be good or positive. That's why politicians have latched onto the idea of the disappearing middle class as a political issue, but none of their income redistribution schemes are likely to have any immediate substantial impact. It makes some Anti-globalization campaigners try to draw people's attention to these points by demonstrating against the World Trade Organization. They think the WTO is the cause of free flow of trade around the world.
Another serious problem which is cause by globalization is cultural aspects. Globalization is viewed by many as a threat to the world's cultural diversity. Some people concern about that globalization decrease or remove local economy, tradition and languages by capitalism and the power of developed countries. For instance, a Hollywood film is far more likely to be successful worldwide than one made in India or China, which also have thriving film industries.
All these impacts of globalization are related to the development of information technology. In the core of IT, there is the development of the Internet. Most people can use Internet without any disturbance, however, not all people are able to join the global community made by the Internet. Countries in the developing world are not able to take advantage of the Internet in the same way as developed nations can. There is no universally equal access to Internet all over the world. Some people from countries like North Korea has few opportunities to access Internet because its government censor it. Also, some poor countries have no opportunities to use any IT products. Therefore, disadvantages people and businesses in developing nations who are unable to take advantage of the Internet's global potential.
 

2014년 9월 22일 월요일

Week 7 - The Narration

My persuasive argument thesis is:  Even though globalization and internet has made better world, internet's contribution to globalization is negative.


1. What do people already know about my topic?

People may know that almost of the Earth has been globalized. They can communicate with other people abroad on the Internet, even they talk to them face to face and hear their voices. Also, they can buy goods from abroad because  enterprises sell their products not only in their own country but also other countries, and people expend their interest, so they can encounter new things from other countries not just limited in their own country. They know that the internet has brought this phenomenon. Internet can connect people all over the world the world and contact new things through itself. 

2. What research has already been done about my topic?
-good explanation about globalization, especially it mentions about anti-globalization movement. Also, it deals with negative aspects of globalization so it lets me know that people recognize some negative effects of globalization.
- helpful and reliable research(report by UN) about negative effects about globalization. The report states that globalization make the gap between the poor and the rich much bigger than before by developed countries' dominance of the world's economic and cultural markets. Also, the report focuses on the spread of Internet and computer technology's impact on the globalization. This research can prove my thesis statement. The report warns that glaring, growing inequalities in the distribution of wealth between rich and poor countries. Therefore, I could strongly appeal and insist how globalization contribute negatively to out lives.

3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

People should be more aware of negative effects of the internet. Although globalization connects the world, it has negative impacts on human life, especially among people from the third world and developing countries. In the case of developed countries, they go through the richer-get-richer phenomenon and the information lean too much on some people who already have information. These facts are the basis for persuading people and I should urge them to be cautious about globalization and be serious about this proble . Also, with those information and resources I think I have to persuade people who ignore me with more specific details and supports. My purpose is to aware people about the danger and awareness of globalization.

<My narration>

The definitions of ‘globalization’ are various. However, they have common idea that globalization is the process of interaction and integration in economical, cultural, and financial worldwide within various nations.
Many people think globalization is a recent one, but we can find globalization from thousand years ago. We can say the examples of trades many years ago between the easter countries and western countries. The merchants from both side sold their products to other merchants from different region, and the path named Silk Road connected areas in a distant such as Central Asia, China, and Europe, is the proof of their trades. In fact, the current wave of globalization which everybody knew began after the Second World War. After the war, many governments have adopted free market and open economic systems and policies. The international trades and investments increased between various countries. Many governments removed barriers in commerce and have established international agreements to promote trade in goods, services, and investments. Corporations took advantage of new opportunities in foreign markets and they started built their factories in foreign areas. Also, a huge amount of people immigrated and emmigrated.
Nowadays, Internet, affects a lot to people's lives in various areas. For example, the Internet enable companies to promote productivity through by much faster access of information and electronic transactions. Also, new jobs are created such as IT professionals and engineers. Internet has altered the structure of the mass media : local and national news changed into world wide news. Some negative view thinks Internet has contributed negatively to people's lives because English speakers dominate the media and they have popularized American culture. Whatsoever, Internet is indeed the major advancement in the modern era which make people easily connect, contact, and control other people and world.
All the aspects of Internet can prove that Internet has a signigicance on globalization. Due to the technological development, globalization has been facilitated. Mostly, internet promote faster and easier communication. Internet provides cheaper and faseter method of communication such as fast phone calls in a distance through web, and web cameras, microphones, messengers are all technologies that make people communicate with other people far from them through the Internet. These new types of communication which internet provide has a significant impact of globalization because it connects people all over the world.
Because of the globalization's effects, people think globalization positively. At first, people consider globalization as the greater opportunity for people around the world for economical increased standard of living.  Furthermore, There is a greater access to foreign culture in the form of movies, music, food, clothing, and more. Second, they think globalization brought economical effect. Also, knowledge and technologies exchanged and was shared among countries. Globalization provides the people of the developing countries different kinds of jobs to live their lives and the developed ones a great many benefits.

2014년 9월 15일 월요일

First Draft introduction

You can call your friend abroad no matter what time it is, and you can use any products that were manufactured abroad. Also, you can see dramas or movies from other countries and you can meet foreigners from various countries if you go outside. These are all phenomenons that globalization has created. Globalization has connected and made people communicate each other more easily and flexibly. After the internet has been created, internet has contributed globalization in the Earth a lot because people can be connected on the website more easily than real life. However, we should think about the globalization and internet's contribution to globalization is positive or helpful to the people all around the world. Even though globalization and internet has made better world, internet's contribution to globalization is negative.


1. Attention grabber 

- I attracted the audience by describing these days situation of globalization, like connecting and communicating with each other on the website or using products from other countries. Then, I mention that all phenomenons are caused by globalization. 

2. Explains the topic 
- In the attention grabber, I introduce the globalization and its phenomenons which are the key points
of my essay. Also, I explain the internet's contribution to globalization. 



3. My thesis 
-  My thesis is ' internet's contribution to globalization is negative.' I think it is clear and direct because my thesis is a abstract of what I'm going to say on the essay. At first, my thesis was ' we shouldn't think internet's contribution to globalization positively', but it is a little bit vague so I changed my thesis. 

2014년 9월 9일 화요일

Classical argument outline


1. The introduction

I will start by describing these days, for example, how people are connecting each other and how they are coumminicating  briefly. Then, I will shift attention to how this phenomenon can happen and how the internet contribute to this phenomenon. Also, I think I should mention about this is globalization and the exact definition of globalization. Then, I will ask a question about this phenomenon and I will end with my thesis, " We should not think internet's contribution to globalization positively.'

2. The narration

I will summarize the research I've done, for example, the internet's role in these days and its importance in globalization. Also, I would like to inform about how globalization processes and the negative effects of globalization and explain about why people only think globalization positively. 


3. The confirmation

I will start by negative effects of globalization. I would like to mention that there aren't only positive effects of globalization and we should think about its negative side. After I deliver negative effects of globalization, I will explain how Internet intensify negative side of globalization. Then, I will explain why we should think about both positive and negative side and why my thesis is negative to globalization.

4. The refutation and concession

I will concede that there are lots of positive effects of globalization again. However, after I concede that, I will explain the negative effects of globalization have been covered with the positive effects. I will deliver we should see the hidden side of globalization and claim that we should be aware of its risk.

5. The summation
I will close with some arguments which I suggest before. Then, I will explain a brief foresight if we consider the positive effects of globalization only. I assert that we should think about people in the third world or developing countries, and also, the privacy of ourselves. I will end with strong reaffirmation of my own thesis. 

2014년 9월 8일 월요일

Articulation

<Articulation>

1) My argument is internet's contribution to globalization is negative. 
I want to argue that whether we should regard internet's contribution positively or not. Usually, people think globalization positively because they think globalization connects people all over the world and make develop their economy. In addition, they think internet's contribution to globalization also positively. However, I heard somewhere that globalization has affected negatively in some aspects and I agree with those ideas. In conclusion, I want to let people know about negative effects of globalization and persuade them.


2) How I found my argument 
 My first research question was 'What is 'globalization'?'. Globalization is  globalization is the process by which businesses or other organizations develop international influence or start operating on an international scale.  This research helps me to define the exact definition of globalization. Then, I continued researching about internet's role and it's role in globalization these days. Internet connects lots of people all around the world and deliver huge amount of information. Also, Internet plays a main role of globalization these days. In addition, there are positive effects and negative effects of globalization. I realized that even though people think globalization is helpful for our lives, there are still lots of negative effects of globalization.

3) New research questions 
I have several questions that need to be resolved.
1) Why people think globalization positively?
2) How globalization processes these days?
3) Why people attract to only positive aspects of globalization?


4) Connections to the Harvard Sampler 
This argument has some connections to the Harvard Sampler. First, this argument is related to the 'The Internet and Hieronymus Bosch : Fear, Protection and Liberty in Cyberspace.' I would like to focus globalization on Internet mainly and also deal with protection or liberty related to globalization on my essay. It may explain why globalization make fear in cyberspace and why we need protection and liberty in globalization.

Research 3

Source: The Positives and Negatives of Globalization
https://sites.google.com/site/nativgatingtheglobalcomau/the-positives-and-negatives-of-globalization
Positive and Negative effects of Globalization
http://www.studymode.com/essays/Positive-And-Negative-Effect-Of-Globalization-749508.html
 
 
My Topic:  Should we think Internet's contribution to globalization positively?
 
 
What I hope to learn from this source:
I would like to learn about  positive effects of globalization. I want to know why people think globalization is positive and the proofs that support their opinions.
 
Notes:

< Positive effects of globalization>
① Greater opportunity for people around the world for economical increased standard of living
- Global competition encourages creativity and innovation and keeps suitable prices and qualities for commodities or services.
- Developing countries are able to reap the benefits of current technology.
- Governments are able to better work together towards common goals now that there is an advantage in cooperation.
- There is a greater access to foreign culture in the form of movies, music, food, clothing, and more.
 
② Economical Effect
- many countries move to market sectors that they are better at
- countries in the globe trade goods with each other, and it promoted the trading rate. (knowledge and technologies exchanged and was shared among countries) - - - globalization also provides the people of the developing countries different kinds of jobs to live their lives and the developed ones a great many benefits. 


 
Final Thoughts:  
Through the research, I know why people think globalization positively. They think globalization brought positive effects such as people who are from developed countries can have economical increased standard of living and trades all over the world become benefits to many countries. I wonder whether there are any side effects which globalization can cause.

Research Question 1

<Research Questions>

-Is human is always better than anything in the Earth?
-Does human mind can control everything?
-Should the government carry out the online real-name policy?
-Should euthanasia allow to every people?
-Should the companies reveal process of distribution their products to the public?
-Should celebrities reveal their privacy for their fans?
-Why people trust celebrities or power bloggers' saying without any doubt?

- Should we think Internet's contribution to globalization positively?

2014년 9월 7일 일요일

Research 2

Source: 

The Impact of the Internet on Globalization
https://www.google.co.kr/?gfe_rd=cr&ei=dT4MVJy1PLDH8gers4GQBQ&gws_rd=ssl#newwindow=1&q=internet+globalization
http://www.ehow.com/info_12040126_impact-internet-globalization.html
http://www.yourmaindomain.com/web-articles/role-of-internet-in-modern-era.asp
 
My Topic: 

Should we think Internet's contribution to globalization positively?
 
 
What I hope to learn from this source:

 I would like to know what and how the Internet impact on globalization and communicating through internet. Also, I would like to know if internet affects various areas these days.
 
 
Notes:

[ Internet's significance on globalization ]
- due to the technological development, glovalization has been facilitated
- mostly, internet promote faster and easier communication. Internet provides cheaper and faseter method of communication such as fast phone calls in a distance through web, and web cameras, microphones, messengers are all technologies that make people communicate with other people far from them through the Internet.
- These new types of communication which internet provide has a significant impact of globalization because it connects people all over the world.
 
 
[ Internet's various roles in various area ]
◉ Business
- enable companies to promote productivity through by much faster access of information and lectronic transactions
- new jobs created : IT professionals and engineers
 
◉ Mass Media
- altered the structure of the mass media : local and national news changed into world wide news
- negative effect : English speakers dominate the media and they have popularized American culture

[ Role of Internet in the modern era ]
- Internet has created much easier and earlier routine in many peoples' lives
- Internet also created tiring and physically demanding works on the finger tips
- deliver lots of information by e-news instead of newspaper
- widen opportunities for business and professional developments : advertisements and promotions of products become much easier
- making money on the Internet become easier : through web sites, people easily sell and buy and exchange their products
- Internet is indeed the major advancement in the modern era which make people easily connect, contact, and control other people and world.

Final Thoughts : Internet has affected on various areas and in various ways. However, even if it is hard to find out, I should more research about how internet has affected on people's lives in various ways and if we should evaluate their role positively or negatively.



2014년 9월 1일 월요일

Research 1

Source:

http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/english/globalization
http://www.businessdictionary.com/definition/globalization.html
http://www.globalization101.org/what-is-globalization/

My Topic:

Should we think Internet's contribution to globalization positively?

What I hope to learn from this source:

I want to find the definition of 'globalization' which is appropriate for my essay. 

Notes:

<definitions of globalization from various sources>


Oxford Dictionary : globalization is the process by which businesses or other organizations develop international influence or start operating on an international scale

Business Dictionary : The world wide movement toward economic, financial, trade, and communications integration. Globalization implies the opening of local and nationalistic perspectives to a broader outlook of an interconnected and interdependent world with free transfer of capital, goods, and services across national frontiers. However, it does not include unhindered movement of labor and, as suggested by some economists, may hurt smaller or fragile economies if applied indiscriminately.

the website which introduces what is globalization is
Globalization is a process of interaction and integration among the people, companies, and governments of different nations, a process driven by international tradeand investment and aided by information technology. This process has effects on the environment, on culture, on political systems, on economic development and prosperity, and onhuman physical well-being in societies around the world.
 

⇒ My own definition : the definitions of globalization are very various. However, they have common idea that globalization is the process of interaction and integration in economical, cultural, and financial worldwide within various nations.

<History of Globalization>
Many people think globalization is a recent one, but we can find globalization from thousand years ago. We can say the examples of trades many years ago between the easter countries and western countries. The merchants from both side sold their products to other merchants from different region, and the path named Silk Road connected areas in a distant such as Central Asia, China, and Europe, is the proof of their trades. In fact, the current wave of globalization which everybody knew began after the Second World War. After the war, many governments have adopted free market and open economic systems and policies. The international trades and investments increased between various countries. Many governments removed barriers in commerce and have established international agreements to promote trade in goods, services, and investments. Corporations took advantage of new opportunities in foreign markets and they started built their factories in foreign areas. Also, a huge amount of people immigrated and emmigrated.
 
Final Thoughts: 

Globalization has lots of meanings, but most of them have common idea that it's a process of worldwide integration and interation. In that case, globalization is not a recent one and some phenomenon we can find thousand years ago. After the research about the history of globalization, globalization become familiar to me because it has always existed with people. I realized that free market policy affected globalization after the second world war.  Also, after the research, I decided to research about positive and negative impacts of globalization.

Research Proposal-change

What is my current topic?
My current topic is ' Should we think Internet's contribution to globalization positively?'.I want to research about Internet's role in globalization and its contribution. Also, I should redefine and research about the definition of globalization. My final persuasive essay will be about deciding whether Internet's role in globalization positively or not.

What are my guiding questions?
What is 'globalization'?
What is Internet's role in these days?
How the Internet contribute to globalization?
How can we evaluate Internet's contribution to globalization?
Can we think Internet's role in globalization positively?

What are my current thoughts?

I only knew that Internet promote globalization. In my opinion, I think Internet's role in globalization is not positive. Both Internet and globalization brought too many problems these days.

What is the opposition?
My opponent will say that Internet has contributed positively to globalization. They may say Internet connects many people all around the world and make them easy to communicate and share their information. I think my counterarguments will be about that even though Internet's contribution has brought positive effects, it also has bought negative effects such as violation of privacy and information polarization,