Self-evaluation

1) What score do you think you deserve? 

I think I will deserve 1 point. My first draft needs to be refined. I cannot say my confirmation part is enough to deliver my opinions. On the other hand, I wrote full one persuasive essay under a fully understanding of each parts of persuasive essay. 

2) What did you do well?

I did well on research. I tried hard to find sources from reliable and various website. As a result, I researched enough to elaborate my narration and confirmation. Also, the researches were helpful to write a refutation part.

3) What could you have done better?

I should have lengthen the confirmation part and shorten the narration part. The most important part in the essay is confirmation because it delivers what I'm trying to say. However, I focused on the the negative effects of globalization , not the cause of it and why internet is related to the globalization. My research was not enough to elaborate my confirmation. I could have done better if I had focused on right direction.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

I think I did best on my narration. I think I found enough information for the research and use the information for my narration. Thus, my narration has enough information to understand the world essay because it includes full background of the topic. 

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

I could have done better on my confirmation part. I should have found out the causes of negative effects of globalization, but I only found out the phenomenons of globalization. Thus, I regretted a little bit to focus more on the cause and effects of globalization, not just the phenomenons. 

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?

First, I should cut out unnecessary information from the narration. I should pick out really needy information and elaborate them. Second, I will focus on how the globalization is related to Internet to intensify my confirmation. I should research more on the causes of globalization and negative effects which are brought by Internet. Third, I need to correct refutation part, Some part of refutation seems illogical, so I need to change them. Plus, I think I need to correct the overall logic in my essay.  I think my second draft will be better after all things that I wrote down.